angelita26
06 April 2016 @ 05:50 pm
Meme: DVD Commentary  
[livejournal.com profile] elrhiarhodan got this one started today, and I love to play this meme so much. Ask me about any fic in any fandom that I've written, and I will happily divulge details.

Here's how it works:

Pick a passage from my stories, up to 500 words, from anything I've written in my LJ masterlist and on AO3 (my AO3 masterlist has my Teen Wolf fic in addition to all the WC and WCRPS goodies), and comment to this post with that selection (including a link to the story being excerpted). I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the story, awful puns [perhaps], and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.

If you would like to ask about multiple stories, that's awesome. Please post the passages in separate comments so that I can respond coherently about each one. :)

Note: My LJ masterlist was updated recently, and the only things missing are the recent Fic Alphabet Challenge ficlets, which are also available for use in this meme.
 
 
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[identity profile] angelita26.livejournal.com on April 8th, 2016 10:53 pm (UTC)
Talk to me about how you developed the Hughes family and their history.

So the initial idea I had for a story was for Neal to meet a woman and fall for her and then later find out that she was Hughes' daughter. Hughes would not like this, but they would already be in love, so he would have to accept Neal as, eventually, a son-in-law. I could never get that story off the ground, so I started to come up with other story ideas that involved Hughes because I really wanted to write something where Hughes and Neal had to forge a friendship.

I love to read/watch stories about kidnapped children who are returned home after many years, so I started working that angle. I knew I wanted to use a medical event – some form of transplant – and I knew that I wanted it to be Hughes' daughter that needed the transplant. I liked the idea of Neal and Emma being twins, and it gave the story more emotional weight – that these twins were torn apart, that the Hughes family had one twin but had lost the other, that Emma would feel like she was missing something her entire life and maybe Neal would feel that way too.

The Deep End of the Ocean was a movie that I really liked for the subject matter, and I'd also read the book on which it was based – highly recommend the book! The mother in that story had withdrawn from her family emotionally, and I wanted to explore that to a bit of a lesser degree with Cathy. She was still there for the kids, but she had to deal with Daniel's disappearance in her own ways.

Also, the older brother in that movie/book had a lot of guilt about losing his younger brother, and I also wanted to explore that with Michael. I wanted him to be a strong but wounded adult. And I thought it would be a nice little irony if he were also a Marshal and knew a little about Neal. There's some nature vs nurture arguments there that one could make with them that I rather enjoy. Would Neal have still become a criminal if he had grown up as Daniel Hughes? Would Michael still be a Marshal if he had been kidnapped instead?
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