angelita26
19 August 2013 @ 06:32 pm
WC - Draughts (Gen)  
Title: Draughts
Author: angelita26
Rating: PG
Characters and/or Pairing: Gen – Peter, Neal
Word Count: ~1100
Summary: After the events of Vigil, Peter's healing, but he and Neal are both having trouble dealing with the shooting.

Notes: Written for [livejournal.com profile] sahiya, who asked for a timestamp to Vigil in my Prompt Me timestamp meme. My apologies for the long wait. I hope you enjoy!



Three days later, Peter had been moved to a private room instead of being released because the doctors were cautious of his recovery due to a nicked aorta. However, visiting hours were less restricted, and Peter was able to rest more comfortably because the nurses weren't constantly in and out of his room.

It had taken a full 24 hours after Peter woke up for him and Elizabeth to convince Neal to go home, sleep a few hours and get a shower. After that, Neal and El switched off so that one of them could at least rest in a bed and not just an uncomfortable visitor's chair.

Peter looked up when there was a triple knock on his door and smiled when Neal stepped inside a moment later, carrying a brown paper bag. "Hey! What do you have there?"

"Since you're more awake now, I brought us a couple of board games. And…" He dug in the bag and pulled out a book and a pack of pencils. "I also got you a crossword puzzle book."

"Beginner series? Neal!" Peter frowned at the book and tried to give it back to his friend. He grunted when pain flared briefly through his chest at the movement, but covered it by flapping the book at Neal and saying, "Take this back."

"Hey, with the drugs that you're on, I didn't want you to be upset that you couldn't finish a New York Times Sunday edition just yet. If this proves too easy, I'll get you a different one. I promise."

Peter sighed and set the book and pencils aside. He hated to concede the point, but Neal was right. His head was fuzzy with the pain medication and antibiotics that were coursing through his system. "I'll let you know."

Neal grinned and sat down on the foot of Peter's bed. With one hand resting gently on Peter's ankle, Neal took a moment to look him up and down. "How are you feeling?"

Peter tried to project an aura of health and virtue, but he suspected that he fell a bit short of the mark. When he'd shuffled into the bathroom this morning with the help of a nurse, he hadn't been surprised that the face in the mirror was pale and haggard. There had been dark bags under his eyes, but he hoped that the two-hour nap he'd taken had helped with that.

"Peter?"

He'd spaced out while thinking about being healthy. That wasn't a good sign. "Sorry. I'm doing all right. Sore and short of breath sometimes, but the doctor says that I’m healing up. They might let me out in a couple of days."

"That's great news. Are they sure it's not too soon?" Neal was trying to sound positive, but he had paled at the mention of Peter's prospective release.

Peter frowned and wished Neal was sitting closer so that he could reassure him with a touch on the shoulder or arm. "They're keeping a close eye out for infections or other complications, but they think I'll rest better at home."

"Yeah, rest is hard to come by when the nurses are waking you up every hour or two."

Nurses were the bane of patients' sleep habits, which Peter had decided a couple of days ago. "Don't I know it." He pointed to the bag that was on the floor, out of his reach. "What else did you bring me?"

Neal smiled, reached down and pulled out a board game box. "How about a rousing game of Checkers?"

"Checkers? Are you kidding me?"

"Do you really want to play me at chess?"

"Fair point. But Checkers?"

Neal shrugged and set up the game on the rolling tray table that extended over the bed. "I thought you'd be a pretty good opponent, even with all those meds, but if you'd rather admit defeat now…"

Peter pushed himself to sit up a little straighter in the bed. "Don't get cocky. And I claim white."

Peter made the first move, and they alternated several times before Neal took one of Peter's pieces. It was then that Peter noticed Neal's hand was shaking. They played a few more rounds before either said anything.

"How are you doing with all this?" Peter asked as casually as he could.

Neal gave him a strange look over the board and made a spectacularly bad move with one of his black pieces.

Peter jumped three of his checkers and moved them off the board. "Have you talked to anybody?" Neal opened his mouth to reply, but Peter cut him off with, "Mozzie doesn't count."

"He's a licensed psychologist."

"Licensed by who? The University of Phoenix?"

Neal sighed and made another bad move.

"Are you trying to lose now? You think if you let me win, then I'll stop asking? I'm not on that many drugs, Neal."

Neal glared and moved one of his pieces to the edge of Peter's side of the board. "King me."

Peter pushed the tray table aside. They were going to have this conversation whether Neal liked it or not. "Diana told me that you were the one to apply--"

Neal interrupted. "I did what anyone else would have done."

"Yes, but you did it for me."

"You would have done the same--"

"I'm trying to thank you here, Neal."

"I don't want you to thank me. I just want you to be okay."

"And I will be."

"Then the matter is settled." Neal dumped the checkers and the board back into the box and shoved into the paper bag. "I should go so that you can rest. Call me if you need anything."

"Neal--"

"I'll see you tomorrow."

"Neal--"

"Night, Peter." And then he was out the door.

Peter laid his head back and sighed. That could have gone better.

~~!!~~

Later that night, Peter lay awake in bed, unable to fall asleep since he'd refused medicinal help. He'd coaxed Elizabeth into going home and sleeping the night in their bed, so now he was alone and caught up in morbid thoughts about all the ways his shooting could have gone wrong.

He picked up his cell phone without giving himself time to reconsider and pressed the speed-dial for Neal. It rang three times before his friend answered.

"Peter?"

"Did I wake you?" Peter hadn't looked at the time before he called, and it was after midnight.

"No, no. Are you okay?" Neal was concerned and Peter could kick himself for causing the younger man any more worry.

"I'm fine. Just can't sleep."

"Oh."

The silence stretched out for a long beat. "Neal?"

"I'm still here." He sounded exhausted, more exhausted that even Peter felt.

Peter quickly responded with a sincere "I am too."

"I know."

"Good." Peter's eyelids were getting heavy, and he could tell that Neal's words were slurring with fatigue. "I'm not going anywhere."

"You'd better not."

They both yawned then, and Peter felt so much better after hearing Neal's voice. He hoped Neal felt the same. "Night Neal."

"G'night, Peter."

~End



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kanarek13[personal profile] kanarek13 on August 19th, 2013 10:50 pm (UTC)
Awww, a bedtime story for me ♥ You always seem to know when to post :D :D :D

Love this, of course \o/ The interaction between the two of them - spot on! This is 100% Neal and Peter, both knowing exactly what the other one thinks and both not really sure how to approach the subject. They try and fail a bit but then find a way to make it right again :D

*hugs them*

Thank you \o/
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[identity profile] angelita26.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2013 12:21 am (UTC)
I'm so glad you liked it! Sometimes I get in a groove where I feel like I'm in Neal's and Peter's heads, and the end here was definitely one of those times. It felt like it wrote itself. Thank you!
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sherylyn[personal profile] sherylyn on June 21st, 2015 09:46 am (UTC)
I know Kanarek commented first, but I just had to echo what she said. This is just really, perfectly *them*, when trying to deal with hard stuff and now quite sure how to say it.

And also, Neal's exhaustion? Again, absolutely, completely spot-on. There is just no other type of exhaustion quite like *that* kind. Not saying it's *the* "worst," or whatever, just that it's very specific/unique in how it affects you. <3
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[identity profile] joy2190.livejournal.com on August 19th, 2013 11:28 pm (UTC)
Great story! I loved the humor despite the seriousness if the situation;
Neal opened his mouth to reply, but Peter cut him off with, "Mozzie doesn't count."
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[identity profile] angelita26.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2013 12:22 am (UTC)
Thank you! The guys do such great banter, and it's a bit humorous usually, so I was going for that. I love the "Mozzie doesn't count" line too! :)
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[identity profile] dennih23.livejournal.com on August 19th, 2013 11:57 pm (UTC)
Awww - poor boys - each trying to assure the other that everything is okay.

Good." Peter's eyelids were getting heavy, and he could tell that Neal's words were slurring with fatigue. "I'm not going anywhere."

"You'd better not."

Perfect banter between the two.
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[identity profile] angelita26.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2013 12:28 am (UTC)
Thank you! I've had the beginning piece written for a while, but the end finally came to me, and I really enjoyed writing that bit of reassuring banter at the end. The guys are too cute.
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[identity profile] caseyf123.livejournal.com on August 20th, 2013 12:50 am (UTC)
Awwww, That was really sweet.
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[identity profile] angelita26.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2013 12:28 am (UTC)
Thank you! :-D
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[identity profile] lauracollared.livejournal.com on August 20th, 2013 03:07 am (UTC)
Oooooh I love Neal having to leave cause it's too much and then the phone call <3 awwww. Love this.
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[identity profile] angelita26.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2013 12:39 am (UTC)
Awwww, thank you! Those are two of my favorite parts too :)
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[identity profile] pipilj.livejournal.com on August 20th, 2013 11:02 am (UTC)
Aww this was sweet. glad they could sleep in the end
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[identity profile] angelita26.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2013 12:39 am (UTC)
Me too :) Thank you!
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leesa_perrie: Peter Neal S4[personal profile] leesa_perrie on August 20th, 2013 12:04 pm (UTC)
Lovely, and so very them.

I also loved the 'Mozzie doesn't count' comment from Peter! :)
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[identity profile] angelita26.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2013 12:41 am (UTC)
Thank you so much!

P.S. I love your icon! Very pretty :)
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leesa_perrie: Peter Neal S4[personal profile] leesa_perrie on August 22nd, 2013 11:29 am (UTC)
Icon is by [livejournal.com profile] midnight_road, and I agree, very pretty!
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sapphire2309[personal profile] sapphire2309 on August 21st, 2013 01:54 pm (UTC)
I love how they didn't have to hash out the problem in order to solve it :)
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[identity profile] angelita26.livejournal.com on August 22nd, 2013 12:46 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad that it worked out - I was trying to do that and wasn't entirely sure it made sense. :-D
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embroiderama[personal profile] embroiderama on September 1st, 2013 03:37 pm (UTC)
"I'm still here." He sounded exhausted, more exhausted that even Peter felt.

Peter quickly responded with a sincere "I am too."


That's such a perfect little exchange, like the whole story in miniature. Lovely!
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[identity profile] angelita26.livejournal.com on September 2nd, 2013 02:08 am (UTC)
Awww, thanks! That is probably my favorite exchange in the fic, but the whole last bit really came together well. I'm glad you liked it!
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